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Rev. Kevin T. Taylor's avatar

Millie, I smiled at how quickly Key West becomes more than a beautiful arrival in this scene. The island is opening in front of them at the exact moment MomStreams becomes impossible to experience as a small, contained thing anymore, and you let each person reveal who they are through the attention: Kona blooms, Sharon reads the momentum, Gus absorbs the scale, and Millie quietly searches for an exit. That brief exchange between Millie and Kona about what they actually “have” gives the whole arrival a deeper heartbeat, since the question beneath the recognition is still what kind of life they want to build together. I love watching you let the spectacle stay fun while the human stakes continue moving underneath it, my friend.

Millie Torres's avatar

Thank you for this. I want to give my readers something each week, and this moment was pivotal for the family. Those who are signed up to read Tiara Training are seeing where the majority of my week’s effort is going, but I don’t want others to miss out on seeing something Tiara in their inbox. Thank you for reading and your endless support!

Rev. Kevin T. Taylor's avatar

Millie, you have somehow created the best kind of editorial problem: *Tiara Training* gets the full banquet, and the rest of us still need a plate passed down the table. This Key West moment did exactly that, giving everyone a real piece of the family’s turning point while letting your subscribers experience how much more is unfolding behind it. I’m always glad to be somewhere near the table, my friend.

Dave Boyko's avatar

Really enjoy the arrival energy!

Millie Torres's avatar

Yes, that was a while back, but the moment was really something.