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Rev. Kevin T. Taylor's avatar

Millie, the gallery’s polished rituals and your deliberate everydayness create a social collision, then Sebastian’s name quietly turns the scrutiny toward the assumptions moving in both directions. You entered expecting to unsettle the consultants and left wondering what you may have projected onto him, which allows the humor to mature into curiosity. The sailboat, the uncoiled lines, and Callie keep the encounter rooted in the ordinary details that can open an unexpected route toward another person. Grateful for the wit and self-awareness with which you let a cold room, a glass of water, and one imperfect conversation become an invitation to look again.

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I resonated with your callida juntura, “because more than one ordinary thing tends to pop breakers in my head,” Millie. I gained mass as the vibration of my mind molecules stiffened. Brava!

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